how's it look

I don't have a fancy title or anything and this is just what i have so far, any suggestions because it looks kind of boring and I'm not even sure I'm doing it right


“Cliques”by Afra Siddiqui
1. EXT. Universal School – Morning - est. shot
2. INT. Universal School –Morning
Students coming in (fewer frames) or POV of a student walking in (fewer frames)
then
(more frames so it’s slower) get everyone socializing in their own groups
(should the camera be moving, weaving in and out of groups up and down or should it just be different shots of the different groups)
then
sound of bell ringing-everyone empties the hallways going into their classrooms-the dissolve thing V.O. (Voice-over)interview with Amira Matareyeh
Questions to ask:

INT. classroom – morning
Montage of the students in classCUT TO:
ext. Universal school-time morning
Turns, focuses on car, zooms out and is inside the principal’s office
Questions to ask Principle:

If the answer has something that can be shown, cut to image of that, then go back to the principal, maybe different view like profile or ?

Turns, zoom in on sign in office
Get pics of the nov. 5th movement and have v.o. talking about it

Go btw. Images of society and cliques in school
Have leaders at the end, play the end of A Dream by common, v.o. of freedom then credits